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[fi01]

Ty Rainbow xxx god you gotta be joking saying my gramma 's betta than urs!!!! no WAY is it. ur story really flowed, u explained things so well, i felt i was there..in the castle...in Egypt (( have you ever been there Rainbow ? )) i don't think the stories come from me brain, i just let me hand type what it wants to jhi gjgjuf see....? lol i think i get possessed ! i do tend to waffle a bit. hey you never know all us roomies could get these little stories published....???? in one big book! we cud be the new j.k rowlings!! lol.... trying to think of a name for our book...?....any ideas ? can't think, brains dead at mo, just finished work, need 2 sleep at some point......

[fi01]

......ha ! . i spelt grammar wrong !

[UFS-xholliex]

roomies where are all your brill stories....................only two days to go

[poo]

She caught her breath as the cool night air filled her lungs, she was high above the tallest church steeple now... she gazed down upon the view below her, the street lamps twinkled, SNOW glistened with freshly trodden footprints and windows were filled with the warm amber glow of coal fires.... "EMILY!" The voice of her FATHER awoke her with a start. In her hand she clutched a downy, golden FEATHER that glittered as she held it up in the soft glow of candlelight.
Emily felt her father looking at her, she turned her head towards him. "Do you like the PRESENTS Emily?" he asked softly. Emily picked up an ornately crafted wooden box and gently plucked the dainty ANGEL from its velvety casing, she turned the angel over.. yes, the wings were made from the same golden feather she held.. Emily looked at her father in wonder, did he know the power of the delicate object she held clasped in her hand?
Emilys father continued "As you celebrate your 15th birthday this CHRISTMAS eve, your mother and I felt you were ready for such a gift. You will of course have many of your own questions you will want answering.. but for now, we have much to tell you of your mother and I, your siblings and grandparents"
Emily gaped at her father, for as long as she could remember she felt her family was something magical and special, tonight it would seem, her questions would be answered.......

[kayc]

Originally Posted by fi01

One cold evening in December whilst walking to work (in a mundane job), Mary was feeling a little down and also strangely philosophical and thinking about the meaning of life ' what's it all about?' 'why are we here?' 'is everyone really happy livihg in there boxes watching boxes, eating out of MICROWAVE boxes ?' 'why is one side of our planet in deep suffering and the other feasting?' 'who's really running this planet?' 'what's going on!' As mary continued to plod along thinking and thinking, walking (reluctantly) to work, she noticed a shiny PENNY on the pavement and picked this up 'what wish could i make now?' 'mmmm?' then in the corner of her eye she spotted the little white RABBIT, who she always briefly looked at when passing to go to work (the past few months), but never really took notice of this creature before until now, this time something about this rabbit had caught Mary's attention, she could not take her eyes off it. She looked deep into this little rabbit's eyes. Mary felt that this little being's eyes looked very very sad and withdrawn. She could see that he had very liitle space to move in his box, was very small and skinny, and the MONSTER of a pet shop owner had left only green PEPPERS for the creature to eat. Both Mary and the rabbit's eyes were locked for a long time... she could almost hear this being screaming 'please help me' .and then...pang!.. . Mary suddenly felt in her heart a massive strong surge of compassion and sadness for this being. This feeling was so strong that Mary started to weep and with the penny she still had clasped in her hand she wished from her heart that this rabbit and all other living beings on this planet would be free from all suffering, although Mary wasn't sure if angels really did exist, she called (in her mind) an angel to help with this wish or prayer. Suddenly, images blurred together, there was no rabbit anymore only a white shining light, Mary thought it was probably her eyes playing tricks, for staring so long or could it be a spiritual thing? Mary knew if she didn't keep her eyes locked on she would lose this bright light before her eyes. She also felt a little scared as she never really experienced any thing like this before. Suddenly, images were forming before Mary and before she knew it, she was sitting under a great, ancient, giant oak tree, the sky was the brightest blue she had ever seen, and the sun was beaming. 'my god where am i?' Mary felt a lightness,stillness and peace she had never experienced before, everywhere around her she could see human's and animals laughing and playing around her, beautiful birdsound and unusual soft music could be heard, a like she had never heard before. Then to Mary's surprise she saw the little white rabbit sitting infront of her. This time he looked bigger,stronger and happier, there were also a few other rabbits sitting with him, Mary was so happy to see him hopping around happy and free. They needed no words but communicated through there hearts, Mary felt this rabbit was saying 'thankyou' to her, he hopped onto her lap and nuzzled his head into her arm. Still confused Mary turned to her left and to her shock and awe saw an angel sitting next to her, he had no wings but Mary instinctively knew this was a very holy and advanced spiritual being, his skin was almost gold in colour. He spake to Mary through heart and mind saying : 'Mary do not be afraid, i am your guardian angel, atlast you have contacted me i have been at your side through many of your lifetimes and helped and watched you develop, you are a very good and special soul. Your planet's inhabitants have been going through so much unnecessary suffering. Even the wealthiest people who want for nothing are unknowingly suffering everyday. here in this realm is how it should be on your planet, here, there is no hatred, no lies, no torture, no wars, no pain, no disease, no time, no ageing, no unequality, no dictatorship, no propaganda, no controlling and oppression, no mundane work, no concrete buildings and paths, no death. Only love, peace, understanding, compassion, joy and freedom to express your creative self. Humankind have been so blind, brainwashed and separated from the real truth for thousands of years and now Mary the time is nearing. Mother earth is a bountiful and beautiful planet - she too is also a living being and has had enough of all the dark forces oppressing her and her special children, her auric field is now dark and murky from all the dark force oppressors that have been ruling and abusing her - causing earthquakes,wars volcanoes, and other abnormal natural disasters, but this will not go on forever, soon she and the good special souls will rise again to the light and all creatures will live in harmony, just as we do here' Whilst the angel was speaking to Mary she wept and wept and wept.....'Mary' the angel spoke......'out of thousands of people that walked past that little rabbit in the pet shop, over the past few months, sadly you were the only being to stop time and show love for this creature, because animals cannot speak in human terms does that make it right for humans to enslave, control, dominate, kill and eat them against their wills? no it is not right. The angel spoke with Mary about many subjects which enlightened her soul.....she also met and spoke with other souls like herself . and more advanced beings.'The time has come Mary...you are ready to go back'......'back where?'.....'back to earth.Mary'...... Mary was having such a wonderful time she forgot about going home...or going to work even!......'Mary, just call me and i will come to you and help you with any problems you may have, i am always there for you....even if you do not see me you will feel me, always keep your heart big and open and call for my protection when you need it......spread to others (who you feel comfortable with that wont ridicule you) what you have experienced this day in your life and tell them to make time to call their angels to help them with anything and especially others and their enemies. Tell them to ask their angels for signs, white feathers are common etc (if they find it hard to believe) There is nothing an angel cannot help you with...communicate with the angels and you will experience miracles in your life !..keep the faith and keep believing...speak from your heart and not your tongue.....Now you must go, or you will be late for work! the angel laughed.....Oh they do have sense of humours too! Mary thought and laughed too..... 'yes we do Mary!'..said the angel....'your friend would like to say goodbye !'.......Mary turned around and saw her little rabbit friend looking up at her, she looked into his eyes and only saw love happiness and freedom. Mary's eyes were locked with the rabbit's again, everything became a blur, and suddenly she found herself bent over staring through the petshop window again into an empty rabbit hutch!.....she then coninued to walk to work, with a big smile on her face feeling ecstatic. At the foot of the door of her work place Mary found 3 small feathers, 'already i've been given a sign!' 'Thankyou angels xx' Mary later wrote books about her experience and angels, and is now running workshops and conferences on angel therapies and writing more books. ... she has had many miracles happen in her life....thanks to the angels

wowwwwwwwwww that was a long one, well done u

[kayc]

Originally Posted by Rainbow

I don't think that I can beat the last story which was super but here goes.

Deep in the Highlands of Scotland was a castle that time had almost forgotten. The Lord or Laird as he was known, who lived there was a very old man who had lived through wonderful times. But when his wife died he became a recluse. Now he was bedridden and cared for by a Male NURSE sent by an agency and paid for by his nephew, his one surviving relative. The Nurse was not unkind to him, but only saw to his needs and as the days past the old Lord was very lonely. The television bored him and although he was slowly working his way through his large library of book the days seemed endless. Strangely enough it was on of these books that changed his life.
Having finished reading a novel, his Lordship asked the Nurse to bring him a book on travel. In his youth he had travelled all over the world and had a longing to read about those far off places one more time. The Nurse put the book on his bed side table with his coffee and went down-stairs.
When the Lord opened the book a tiny MOUSE jumped out. It had made itself a little bed by chewing at the paper in the centre of the book and curling up in the hollow. His Lordship was so shocked by the sight of the mouse that he leapt out of bed to chase it. The mouse ran up the fireplace and behind the CLOCK. The clock was large and ornate, behind it was a hole in the plaster which went through to the chimney breast. The mouse had escaped.But there sitting behind the clock was a letter.
The letter was from an old friend of his, Susan, his first love. She had married a Duke and a few years later he had met and married his wife. He had no heard of her for years, but when she heard of his wife’s death she wrote to him telling him of a trip she was about to embark on to Egypt. He had put the letter behind the clock and forgot about it in his grief. But now he read it again. On impulse he picked up the phone and called the number on the letter. He knew her voice immediately, and she was overjoyed to hear from him.
She told him that she would visit him the very next day and he left his bed, to his Nurses surprise and dressed to greet her. He opened the door to her himself, and he thought she was the most beautiful woman that he had ever seen. He didn’t notice the lined skin or the grey hair. He just saw the beautiful woman that he had fallen in love with so many years ago. She wore blue, his favourite colour. A simple summer dress with a straw hat and a blue FEATHER on the side of it. He fell in love all over again. She told him that she had lost her husband a few years before and had taken to travelling to ease the loneliness. As well as bringing photos of Egypt she thrilling him with tales of the trip. He closed his eyes and remembered the majestic River Nile with its army of reeds blowing in the wind. That was where he and Susan had first met. They met at a dig beneath on of the towering pyramids and fell in love on the hot sand.
When her story was finished he went over to his desk, there in a draw lay a STRING of the most amazing beads. It was an Egyptian artefact brought back from Egypt by his Father when he was just a baby. Susan was overawed by it, and treasured the chance to hold such an amazing item. He made his mind up, if he could persuade her to marry him, this would be his wedding present to her. A string of beads from the neck of the wife of a pharaoh and their honeymoon would be in the only place possible Egypt, and all thanks to a little mouse.

that was brillllllllllllll, well done rainbow

[fi01]

...Ty kayc........x

[Rainbow]

Hi there kayc, thank you. Here is another site we can burn the midnight oil on I hope that you had a great birthday

[Rainbow]

Originally Posted by poo

She caught her breath as the cool night air filled her lungs, she was high above the tallest church steeple now... she gazed down upon the view below her, the street lamps twinkled, SNOW glistened with freshly trodden footprints and windows were filled with the warm amber glow of coal fires.... "EMILY!" The voice of her FATHER awoke her with a start. In her hand she clutched a downy, golden FEATHER that glittered as she held it up in the soft glow of candlelight.
Emily felt her father looking at her, she turned her head towards him. "Do you like the PRESENTS Emily?" he asked softly. Emily picked up an ornately crafted wooden box and gently plucked the dainty ANGEL from its velvety casing, she turned the angel over.. yes, the wings were made from the same golden feather she held.. Emily looked at her father in wonder, did he know the power of the delicate object she held clasped in her hand?
Emilys father continued "As you celebrate your 15th birthday this CHRISTMAS eve, your mother and I felt you were ready for such a gift. You will of course have many of your own questions you will want answering.. but for now, we have much to tell you of your mother and I, your siblings and grandparents"
Emily gaped at her father, for as long as she could remember she felt her family was something magical and special, tonight it would seem, her questions would be answered.......

See you don't need to write a novel like mine, you can tell a lovely story in a few paragraphs. Nice one Poo.and I want to know what happens next please?

[Rainbow]

Originally Posted by fi01

......ha ! . i spelt grammar wrong !

warra ya mean fi01 dat looks ok to me, der is nofin rong wid ya grammer